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absinthe



Registered: May 2011
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big thanks to my wife for being my model
· Date: Thu May 19, 2011 · Views: 687 · Filesize: 100.1kb, 478.8kb · Dimensions: 1761 x 2348 ·
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Clem

Registered: February 2011
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Sat May 21, 2011 10:45am

Couple things that I'll mention. The table top and vase look a little over exposed, and unfortunately it draws the eye right there. Perhaps the model should look like she's waiting for someone, instead of looking at the camera? As is, the pose looks a little forced. I get the impression that you are trying to frame her face with the black support and railing... not a bad thought, but the post in the center is distracting--what's the furry wreath at the top of that? The post also emphasizes that the image should be rotated a bit counter-clockwise. Crop-wise, I'd lose the bottom of the chandelier upper right and the half table leg on the left. IMO, they don't add. Perhaps panning just a tad to the right would have eliminated the partial table leg and completed the chair on the right.


I'm sorry, these are your first posts and I don't mean to sound so critical; there are plenty of GOOD things working here. The empty chair creates tension, the background has enough interest without being cluttered, and I love the way the light and shadows play on the floor.


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