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kromm Registered: September 2011 Posts: 29	· Date: Thu September 1, 2011 · Views: 1029 · Filesize: 92.3kb, 643.3kb · Dimensions: 2639 x 2758 ·
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Beth

Registered: May 2010
Posts: 1,601

Fri September 2, 2011 10:15pm

I love the visual effect the line creates! Nice job!

kromm

Registered: September 2011
Posts: 29

Sat September 3, 2011 6:00am

thanks a lot Beth

richingr

Registered: October 2010
Posts: 1,511

Sat September 3, 2011 7:20am

This has a good composition but i am put off by the marks on the black backdrop.
If you cloned them all to one solid black backdrop it would look a lot better .

Clem

Registered: February 2011
Posts: 662

Sat September 3, 2011 10:22am

Welcome to the site. I agree with Rich... a little cloning would take care of that. Based on the ground and poles, it gives the illusion that the image is tilted to the right. (It may very well be on sloped ground, but it's a little unsettling to the viewer... a slight rotation counter clockwise would help there.) But I like the composition.

kromm

Registered: September 2011
Posts: 29

Sun September 4, 2011 6:57pm

Thanks rich and Clem, Like your comments. I've taken away the marks and rotad the image slightly. I think it's better now really.

richingr

Registered: October 2010
Posts: 1,511

Sun September 4, 2011 7:25pm

Certainly better.Now you need to start thinking why does a plain composition like this have the start of a good composition for a photo ?? that is the hard bit

kromm

Registered: September 2011
Posts: 29

Mon September 5, 2011 5:17pm

I agree

. I hope to get closer to the answer every time I get the comments of you guys. Thanks

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