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easy426



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honez

Registered: August 2008
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Sun September 19, 2010 10:10am

I like the composition of this, but you seem to be just a bit too far (probably only a touch) to the left. The tower is showing more daylight on the RHS than the left.
It's probably also worth balancing the crop on the right wall with the left too (so the dark brickwork finishes in the bottom right like it does in the bottom left.
I'd also consider burning in the whites on the extreme left and right foreground arches too -- there's be less to burn on the right side if you cropped it like the left.
easy426

Registered: July 2010
Posts: 101
Sun September 19, 2010 1:49pm

Good point of view, Thanks for the advised.
easy426

Registered: July 2010
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Mon September 20, 2010 3:42am

Done, much better now!

 
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